1988. Only The Good Die Young (ïîäñòðî÷íûé ðèôìîâàííûé ïåðåâîä) - IMRWC Ôîðóì

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  • 1988. Only The Good Die Young (ïîäñòðî÷íûé ðèôìîâàííûé ïåðåâîä)

    Only The Good Die Young [4:40]
    Òîëüêî ïðàâåäíèê ïîãèáàåò ìîëîäûì
    (Dickinson, Harris)

    The demon in your mind will rape you in your bed at night
    Áåñû äíåì ðâóò âàñ â êëî÷üÿ, à íî÷üþ íàñèëóþò ìîçã
    The wisdom of ages, the lies and outrages concealed
    Ìóäðîñòü âåêîâ… ëîæü äóðàêîâ … âñå ñìåøàëîñü.
    Time it waits for no man
    Æäàòü âå÷íîñòü íå áóäåò
    My future it is revealed
    Áóäóùíîñòü âñÿ ïðåä ëèöîì
    Time it waits for no man
    Çàïå÷àòëåíî ñòîëüêî ñóäåá
    My fate is sealed
    Ôàòàëüíûì êîíöîì

    If I cancel tomorrow the undead will thank me today
    Íîâûé äåíü êàíåò â òåíü, ìåðòâåöû ïîçîâóò òåáÿ ê íèì
    Fly in the face of your prophets I mock your morality plays
    Â ëèê õàíæåé è ïðîðîêîâ ÿ ïëþíó ñàðêàçìîì ñâîèì
    The moon is red and bleeding
    Ëóíà îêðàñèëàñü êðîâüþ
    The sun is burned and black
    Ñîëíöå òåðÿåò ñâîé ñâåò
    The book of life is silent
    Êíèãà æèçíè áåçìîëâíà
    No turning back
    Íàçàä ïóòè íåò

    Only the good die young
    Ñðîê äëÿ äîáðà èñòåê
    All the evil seem to live forever
    À âîò çëî ïîõîæå çíàìåí íå ñëîæèò
    Only the good die young
    Ñðîê äëÿ äîáðà èñòåê
    All the evil seem to live forever
    À âîò çëî ïîõîæå çíàìåí íå ñëîæèò
    Only the good die young
    Ñðîê äëÿ äîáðà èñòåê
    Only the good die young
    Ñðîê äëÿ äîáðà èñòåê

    Mystery madman a victim of cruel charade
    Î áåçóìåö òû æåðòâîþ ñòàíåøü â îäèí ñòðàøíûé ìèã
    Some innocent pawn in an end game one more stalemate
    Òû íåâèííûé ìëàäåí÷èê â èãðå, ÷òî ïðèâîäèò â òóïèê
    Is death another birthday?
    Ñìåðòü èëè ðîæäåíüå?
    A way to kiss your dreams goodbye?
    Õèìåðû èëè ìå÷òû?
    Do the undead live within us
    Êòî æå æèâåò òâîåé òåíüþ?
    And look through our eyes?
    Ìîæåò áûòü òû?

    Walking on water are miracles all you can trust
    Ïðîéäÿñü ïî âîäå äîëãî áóäåøü ïðåäìåòîì ìîëâû,
    Measure your coffin does it measure up to your lust?
    Íî ïîõîæå ìîãèëà - âîò òî ÷òî ïîëó÷èòå âû
    So I think I'll leave you
    Áëàãîäàðþ, ãàñèì ñâå÷è
    With your bishops and your guilt
    Íå òðàòòå íà èñïîâåäü ñëîâ
    So until the next time
    ×òî æ, äðóã ìîé, ÷òî äî âñòðå÷è
    Have a good sin
    Ïðèÿòíûõ ãðåõîâ

    Only the good die young
    Ñðîê äëÿ äîáðà èñòåê
    All the evil seem to live forever
    À âîò çëî ïîõîæå çíàìåí íå ñëîæèò
    Only the good die young
    Ñðîê äëÿ äîáðà èñòåê
    All the evil seem to live forever
    À âîò çëî ïîõîæå çíàìåí íå ñëîæèò
    Only the good die young
    Ñðîê äëÿ äîáðà èñòåê
    Only the good die young
    Ñðîê äëÿ äîáðà èñòåê

    Seven deadly sins
    Ñåìü - ââåðãàåò â ãðåõ
    Seven ways to win
    Ñåìü - íåñåò óñïåõ
    Seven holy paths to hell
    Ñåìü – èíûõ ïðèâîäèò â àä
    Seven downward slopes
    Ñåìü – íà äíî âëå÷åò
    Seven bloodied hopes
    Ñåìü - ìå÷òû óáüåò
    Seven are your burning fires
    Ñåìü – äîòëà ñîææåò â îãíå
    Seven your desires...
    Ñåìü – â òåáå, âî ìíå…

  • #2
    Êëàññ
    S.D. "Snake" Plissken

    "Òû çíàåøü, ÷òî Iron Maiden - ýòî âîîáùå òî èðëàíäöû è ÷òî ýòî îçíà÷åò?" © asidor

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    • #3
      Ñïàñèáî åùå ðàç... :-)

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      • #4
        Ìîëîäåö!Òîëüêî âîïðîñ ê
        Do the undead live within us
        Êòî æå æèâåò òâîåé òåíüþ?
        And look through our eyes?
        Ìîæåò áûòü òû?
        Ïî-ìîåìó çäåñü ïåðåâîä äðóãîé äîëæåí áûòü!À òàê áëåñòÿùå!!!

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        • #5
          ... íå ñïîðþ... ýòî íå åäèíñòâåííàÿ íàòÿæêà... áóäåò âðåìÿ, ìîæíî áóäåò ïîäðàáîòàòü

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          • #6
            Íåìíîãî ïîäðàáîòàë, âðîäå ýòî áóäåò áëèæå åñëè íå ê òåêñòó, òî ê ñìûñëó... íî êàê îáû÷íî, îäíî ëå÷èì äðóãîå êàëå÷èì... óæ áîëüíî ðäëèííû ðóññêèå àíàëîãè àíãëèéñêèõ ñëîâ... ðàçìåùàþ âåñü ïðåäïîñëåäíèé êóïëåò â íîâîé ðåäàêöèè:

            Mystery madman a victim of cruel charade
            Î áåçóìåö òû æåðòâîþ ñòàíåøü â îäèí ñòðàøíûé ìèã
            Some innocent pawn in an end game one more stalemate
            Òû íåâèííûé ìëàäåí÷èê â èãðå, ÷òî ïðèâîäèò â òóïèê
            Is death another birthday?
            Ñìåðòü – áëàãî, íå ñëóøàé
            A way to kiss your dreams goodbye?
            Òåõ êòî óâÿç â ìå÷òàõ
            Do the undead live within us
            Ñìåðòü â íàñ, â íàøèõ äóøàõ
            And look through our eyes?
            Â íàøèõ ãëàçàõ

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            • #7
              Îòïàäíûé ïåðåâîä, àæ ìóðàøêè ïî êîæå!
              I want shiny cars and dirty money lots of rock and roll
              I will live in fame and die in flames I'm never gettin' old!

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              • #8
                ìîæåò òû ïðîñòî ñèäèøü íà ìóðàâåéíèêå? :-)

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                • #9
                  ÈÌÕÎ, ïåðåâîä õîòü è ëèòåðàòóðíûé, íî äàë¸ê îò îðèãèíàëà. Ïðè÷¸ì òåðÿåòñÿ ñìûñë íå òîëüêî ïåñíè, íî è ðîìàíà. Íî ÷èòàåòñÿ ïðèÿòíî.
                  Последний раз редактировалось Darklighter; 15-06-2006, 19:17.

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                  • #10
                    ... äàé ññûëî÷êó íà ðîìàí. Ìîæåò ñìîãó ïåðåðàáîòàòü ñ ó÷åòîì êîíòåêñòà...

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                    • #11
                      http://lib.ru/search/?query=%D1%E5%E...D&group1=sites
                      Ïîæàëóéñòà.

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                      • #12
                        ïðèíÿòî â ðàáîòó...

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                        • #13
                          Do the undead live within us
                          And look through our eyes?
                          Æèâóò ëè æèâûå ìåðòâåöû âíóòðè íàñ,
                          È ñìîòðÿò ëè íà ìèð íàøèìè ãëàçàìè?

                          Ñòèõè íåïëîõèå, íî ñìûñë ïåñíè ïîëíîñòüþ óòðà÷åí. Íåäîñòîâåðíûé ïåðåâîä.
                          " âîïðîñàõ âåðû è ëþáâè ê Ðîäèíå íåò ìåñòà êîìïðîìèññàì, ÷åëîâåê äîëæåí áûòü íåïðåêëîíåí, òâ¸ðä"
                          (Ïàèñèé Ñâÿòîãîðåö)

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                          • #14
                            ... âñåãäà ëó÷øå îòíîñèëñÿ ê Ïóøêèíó, ÷åì ê Áåëèíñêîìó...

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                            • #15
                              Åñòü åùå Ïàñòåðíàê. Åìó óäèâèòåëüíî óäàâàëîñü òî÷íûé ïåðåâîä ñîâìåùàòü ñ ïðåêðàñíûìè ñòèõàìè.
                              À ðàâíÿòü ñåáÿ ñ Ïóøêèíûì - äåëî ïîñëåäíåå.
                              " âîïðîñàõ âåðû è ëþáâè ê Ðîäèíå íåò ìåñòà êîìïðîìèññàì, ÷åëîâåê äîëæåí áûòü íåïðåêëîíåí, òâ¸ðä"
                              (Ïàèñèé Ñâÿòîãîðåö)

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